quarta-feira, 13 de maio de 2009

CPE level-letter

E os meus dias têm sido assim.....
Dear Editor,

Please allow me to introduce myself. I am the English teacher who called your radio station last Saturday during the programme where ‘attitudes to work’ were being discussed. Having briefly spoken to you over the phone I decided to accept your challenge and address you this letter.
As I explained, I am teaching English in different companies to people who never had any contact with the language. Part of my work includes working late hours, or driving to far away cities, with one day in advance.This is acceptable, but I don’t believe that work must be above all matters.
Most people, and even workers whom I teach, believe that payment is the most encouraging factor. It is well known that large payments are only a consequence of many working hours.Yet, some people still find a relevant importance in maintaining their personal relationships, especially dedicating enough time to familly and friends.Nobody seems to believe that work should be above all these things.
Another important factor, is if whether the working hours are adjusted to the type of work required, or not. If it leaves us enough free time, or if shedulles are organised in a way that allows workers to acomplish their targets, without the need of stressing.
Having a good work environment is essencial. This will allow people to work at their own rythm, and not being disturbed by external factors, such as noise or people around them. If the employer has the option of giving workers a choice of what type of work they will be doing, they should try to do so, having a choice, is always positive.
In conclusion, I strongly defend that our attitude to work depends on all these points having been covered. A pleased worker will work better and we will all benefit from it.
I apreciate this opportunity, and hope this letter has been helpful.

Yours faithfully,

3 comentários:

MigL disse...

Dear Teacher,

Please allow me to briefly comment your kind letter.
Being an English teacher, could you please help me clarify the following questions:

01. Shouldn't a space always follow a period punctuation mark?
02. Is it 'familly' or 'family'?
03. Is it 'shedulles' or 'schedules'?
04. Is it 'organised' or 'organized'?
05. Is it 'acomplish' or 'accomplish'?
06. Is it 'essencial' or 'essential'?
07. Is it 'rythm' or 'rhythm'?
08. Should it be 'attitude to work' or 'attitude towards work'?
09. Should it be 'a pleased worker or 'a satisfied worker'?
10. Is it 'apreciate' or 'appreciate'?

Thanking you in advance for your reply,

Yours truly,
MigL

isabel disse...

Chato!

Sim, a pontuação é bem diferente no 'word' de onde fiz o copy/paste. Mas aqui perdeu-se, e???

Sim, é family, enganei-me. Mas entreguei direitinho, em papel escrito á mão, como deve ser.

It's Schedules.
Mas se é que interessa, erros deste género 'não impeditivos à compreensão de um nativo, não são contabilizados, mesmo num exame do CPE'

It's OraganiZe, se bem que os Britânicos escrevam organiSe, e ambos são considerados 'correctos'.

It's accomplish, e aplica-se a mesma regra: não impeditivo....

It's essential, mesma coisa....

It's 'rhythm'...

Aqui apanhei-te! É mesmo a'attitude' to work, esse era o 'task' escrito no livro mesmo.

Qual é a diferença entre pleased e satisfied? Pleased parece-me mais formal não? Pois. É o que se pretende.

E tb deve ser appreciate.

Mas para que saibas esses erros não são considerados pelo examinador, por não lhe impedirem a compreensão. O que leste foi resultado do que escrevi no word (dá mais jeito p/ contar palavras -tem que ter 300/350) e como está em Pt....

Logo te direi a apreciação da Karen, essa é que conta.

Tb estou a entrevistar candidatos p/ fazerem o CPE por mim, e tu, já que não andas com a tua vida p/ a frente (provavelmente por causa de merdas de atitudes destas) se calhar o dia 18 de Junho podes passar aí em frente no Tuela, que me dizes?
Se te safares no reading, com o resto posso eu bem.

Deal?

'Yours truly'? Dizes isso a alguém? Tsh tsh....
Yours FAITHFULLY, numa formal letter, SEMPRE :p

isabel disse...

''Tb estou a entrevistar candidatos p/ fazeR'....